We have all heard
how convenient Wal-Mart can be for the everyday shopper, but has Wal-Mart taken
convenient to a whole new level? By buying a casket online at walmart.com you
may be saving a lot of time and money, but is it the most convenient way to buy a casket? Walmart sells about 14 different caskets and all
but two are under 2 grand, and ship within 48 hours from Star Legacy Funeral
Network. But is walmart the only place you can
shop for discount caskets? No there are many websites online now that sell a
variety of over 20 differant caskets for under the price of 2 grand and they ship it to the funeral home on whatever date its needed there. You can even get them straight
from star legacy. Buying a casket from walmart may sound like a more convenient way to shop to the everyday walmart shopper but it isn't the only online site with discount prices.
http://www.walmart.com/search/search-ng.do?ic=32_0&tab_value=all&search_query=caskets
http://acanderson24.hubpages.com/hub/Wal-Mart-Caskets-Shipped-in-48-hours
http://weeklyworldnews.com/headlines/13159/walmart-caskets/
Main point of para. seems rather slight (a small question--is it convenient? answer: yes); avoid "you" in this sort of objective research; make sure to include in-text citations; quotation seems like material that could be just as easily paraphrased?; goal was to use three sources per paragraph
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